2012年1月25日水曜日
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I'm a writing A class student. I'll write about this class. The first time I heard I'm a A class, I feel shaking. My teacher is Mr.Waterman. I was told a lot of things by him. For example, don't use fanboys, missing S or V and so on. My weak point is translating so I had to study hard this class. But I couldn't. I couldn't get high score on main paragraph8. Because I wasn't careful about grammer. I had to study more harder and be careful about grammer. If I studied more harder, I would be able to high score. I'll try to be careful about grammer. The second weak point is running short words. I had had to use my electyonic dictionary while I tried to write English. I checked a lot of words but I couldn't memorize words. It was my bad point. I had the vice of it. I noticed it, so I should change the bad points. Then, I read the writing textbook. It is sometimes interesting for me. I could know wisdoms around the world from it and I could think about it deeply. I was especially interested in unit five. The contents were about chocolate and coffee. I like them very much. I was glad I learned about chocolate and coffee around the world. I want to eat chocolate, and want to drink coffee all over the world. Chocolate is good for health but be careful for eating too much it. If I eat enough to chocolate, I would be fat someday. I could learn a lot of things from this class. I will make the most of my experience. Thank you for telling me!!
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It looks like you made a lot of good self-evaluation in writing this journal entry, Mayu. I think you have made some good suggestions to your self, and I agree that your writing will improve even more next year if you are successful in following your advice! Thank you for telling me you enjoyed the reading passages and that they were thought provoking!
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Mr. W.