2012年1月25日水曜日
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I'm a writing A class student. I'll write about this class. The first time I heard I'm a A class, I feel shaking. My teacher is Mr.Waterman. I was told a lot of things by him. For example, don't use fanboys, missing S or V and so on. My weak point is translating so I had to study hard this class. But I couldn't. I couldn't get high score on main paragraph8. Because I wasn't careful about grammer. I had to study more harder and be careful about grammer. If I studied more harder, I would be able to high score. I'll try to be careful about grammer. The second weak point is running short words. I had had to use my electyonic dictionary while I tried to write English. I checked a lot of words but I couldn't memorize words. It was my bad point. I had the vice of it. I noticed it, so I should change the bad points. Then, I read the writing textbook. It is sometimes interesting for me. I could know wisdoms around the world from it and I could think about it deeply. I was especially interested in unit five. The contents were about chocolate and coffee. I like them very much. I was glad I learned about chocolate and coffee around the world. I want to eat chocolate, and want to drink coffee all over the world. Chocolate is good for health but be careful for eating too much it. If I eat enough to chocolate, I would be fat someday. I could learn a lot of things from this class. I will make the most of my experience. Thank you for telling me!!
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Once upon a time, there were grandpa who likes to cook very much and very well. The grandpa would cook fish for dinner so he went to place where he seted a trap on the boat. After he caught fish, and he went back home. The grandpa went to the kitchen when he came back home as soon as. He started cooking there. When he was cooking, he heard something from the second floor. It was a little noise. He got to stairs as he was frighttening. Then, a theif stole some money and somethings from the room, and he would be going away from the place. The grandpa frightened very much, but he could seize the thief and thut in another room. He was very desperately to seize the thief. After that, he called for policeman and he was arrested by him. The grandpa became the hero at the town because he could catch the theif. He was going to be gave a lot of meat and fish from poeple for nothing. From then on, he could enjoy to everyday. He invited a lot of poeple, enjoy to talk with them and enjoy to eat dinner. He almost hold it everyday, looks like the party. The grandpa could spend happly, while the theif spended unhapply. The grandpa was very kind person, so he allowed the thief and invited the party. The theif was moved to tears by his act. The theif decided to change his mind. The theif became a kind person, looks like the grandpa. They could spend very happly. It was nice case for both of them. To allow is important thing for all the people.
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